Here is my entry for 's What Giant Monster Are You contest based on what I would be as a giant monster. Here are my results from the quiz, which resulted in the final designs:
Your Name/Username: Arlo You are a: Reptilian Monstrosity As a result of: Your extraterrestrial origins Offensive Ability: Breath Weapon (Acid) Secondary Ability: Chameleon-Like Invisibility Achilles Heel: Extreme Heat Resistance to heavy artillery: Above Average Primary motivation? Defending your perceived territory The first location you attack: Tokyo, Japan
The official name of this new original kaiju is Ar' Lo (since for the contest the monster has to be YOUR name, I altered my own into two names: first and last). ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
How did I get here? Why have I been abandoned? Ar Lo thought as he opened up his green eyes to the blackness of space. He drifts alone in the emptiness only comforted by the mere thoughts in his head. Was I that too much of a threat to those I befriended? Ar Lo wondered as he stretches out from his fetal position revealing his entire body. He stares deeply into the cosmos, Perhaps I was not meant to protect .am I here for something more? As Ar' Lo prepares to enter stasis, a large shadow passes over him, his green eyes focus of a speeding object, which quickly heads out of sight. Interested in the object, Ar' Lo's back begins to glow a bright green and manages to propel himself to pursue the object. The reptilian-like alien manages to catch up with the object only to discover that the object was actually another alien being, but much bigger than he. Ar' Lo tries to lay low and not anticipate a confrontation, but too late. The other entity has spotted him. Immediately the other beast unleashes rays of pure energy at Ar' Lo. Quickly the alien reptile dodges the blows and retaliates by latching onto the larger creature's back and spews a highly acidic gas from his mouth located at the center of its body, which burns through the larger beast's flesh. It screams in pain. Ar' Lo did not want this confrontation, but what choice did he have? The larger alien grabs Ar' Lo and tosses him in front of him and fires one final ray of energy from the palms of his hands. It strikes the smaller alien and fatally injures him. The beast then rams Ar' Lo into the gravitational pull of a blue-green planet. As he falls into the atmosphere, the extreme heat from entering causes the metallic armor from his former home-world to disintegrate. Just before Ar' Lo is destroyed, he crashes into the ground with great destructive force. An explosion rises into the sky from the crash zone and Ar' Lo begins to drift out of consciences, but not before seeing the silhouettes of tiny yet intelligent looking beings. Seconds later he blacks out...but very much and luckily alive.
Thanks...to be honest it was really hard to come up with a design for a reptilian alien kaiju because A.) I didn't want it to look too "Earthly" and B.) I didn't want it to look to alien. So I spent hours just coming up with designs of reptilian humanoids until this design, which I felt was appropiate for his alien origins and reptilian design.
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Well now...that is pretty impressive. Certainly original by 'Reptilian Monstrosity' standards and it definitely has alien vibes through and through. You have the glow orb the mouthless humaniod face and stomach mouth to thank for that. I definitely like the perspective for this, it has a sense of motion and depth and seems very heroic which is tragic considering the vibes I'm getting from his back story. Said back story is awesome and carries many viable ways to turn it into a series of solid short story. My own critique for this is the edges of the drawing. I appauld the pure painterly touch but it does appear at bit rushed at a close distance. Still, lots of good color and value differences here. I'm betting that this will score quite high come judgement day.
-RenDragonClaw
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For such a simple concept, you sure ran with it quite nicely. The smooth, alien face and stomach maw are what does it. The end result reminds me of the Chameleon from the animated Toonzilla series, but only a little.
The storyline's a bit threadbare, but it works.
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Thanks for the compliments , Yeah, I know the edges are quite jagged especially with the spikes, perhaps I may improve it a bit before the deadline...if that is allowed of course. Designing it was quite a challenge since I wanted to go for an original approach rather than a knock off, which you seemingly frown upon I'm glad it got a good review already because I was kind of worried since this is my first non-Olragon related creation.
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"When I get sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead. True story." -Barney Stinson
Chameleon from GTS did inspire me to do the stomach maw, but it was something that I originally didn't intend to include (originally it was going to be tube-like valves that spew acidic liquid and gas, but I think I went with the right choice). The story on the other hand pretty much opens up for a bigger event, which I may include later on since I feel there is a certain potential for Ar' Lo....not as big as Olragon of course with the animations and comic, but enough to make a seperate art series and kaijuverse revolving around him at least.
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"When I get sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead. True story." -Barney Stinson
Sure thats allowed. As long as the final entry is done by the 26th I have no problem with you editing your entry.
I think you underestimate your own creativity because this guy is a kaiju that could really be something. If you had your usual solid line work in there, he'd be almost bullet proof. So far I've about five entries including yours that stand above the rest in terms of illustration. Gonna be a nail biter.
-RenDragonClaw
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Wow, that is awesome Yeah, I'll definately add in a smooth darker outline around the drawing, probably tomorrow since it is like mid-night here right now.
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"Sorry, I got a sudden urge to hit him when I looked at his face." - Bulgaria, episode 27 of Axis Powers Hetalia
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"When I get sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead. True story." -Barney Stinson
-RenDragonClaw
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It's not that I don't like society, It's that I've been forced to live out side of it due to the over whelming force of: conservatives, conformists, liberals, republicans, democrats, enviromentalists, terrorists, right wingers, religous zealots, media...
The storyline's a bit threadbare, but it works.
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Yeah, I know the edges are quite jagged especially with the spikes, perhaps I may improve it a bit before the deadline...if that is allowed of course. Designing it was quite a challenge since I wanted to go for an original approach rather than a knock off, which you seemingly frown upon
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"When I get sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead. True story." -Barney Stinson
The story on the other hand pretty much opens up for a bigger event, which I may include later on since I feel there is a certain potential for Ar' Lo....not as big as Olragon of course with the animations and comic, but enough to make a seperate art series and kaijuverse revolving around him at least.
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"When I get sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead. True story." -Barney Stinson
I think my Kensis Walkeri just met his alien cousin! O_O
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I think you underestimate your own creativity because this guy is a kaiju that could really be something. If you had your usual solid line work in there, he'd be almost bullet proof. So far I've about five entries including yours that stand above the rest in terms of illustration. Gonna be a nail biter.
-RenDragonClaw
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It's not that I don't like society, It's that I've been forced to live out side of it due to the over whelming force of: conservatives, conformists, liberals, republicans, democrats, enviromentalists, terrorists, right wingers, religous zealots, media...
Yeah, I'll definately add in a smooth darker outline around the drawing, probably tomorrow since it is like mid-night here right now.
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"When I get sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead. True story." -Barney Stinson
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